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CT : Chapter 2 - A letter from the Elders
Chapter 2~A letter from the Elders
Two days after her ordeal at The Elder’s Hall, a letter was posted
through their door-way. It was the week-end. “Alice! Come down, there
is a letter addressed to you.” Her mother called. She came down
thinking it was from a friend, to find her mum holding a fancy envelope
with silver writing that clearly said it was to her, from Elder Bespoke.
“Should I read it now?” Alice felt as if this envelope would dictate her
entire future. But of course she knew it couldn’t. She was just scared.
“Open it! And come show your father.”
They went to the living room and they all sat near each other. The room
was silent except for their heavy breathing. Alice opened the envelope
with care and pulled out two crisp papers that said:
Dear Parents/Guardians of Alice Nightingale,
Your Daughter has come to our facilities and gone through our trials.
We have found that she does have magic within her and this could be
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CT : Chapter 1 - Part 3
Chapter 1- part 3
Following Elder Rowana Alice found herself in a dim room lit by a
singular candle. Shelves lined the two parallel walls and a mahogany
chair sat in the center with a table beside it. Rowana gestured to the
chair. Alice sat down and listened as she explained what was to
happen.  “Close your eyes Alice. Now, I have three boxes here, you
haven't seen where they are on this table or the contents, nor have I. I
ask you to extend your arm and find the table. Then choose a box, open
it and try to feel what the item is. Allow your imagination to wander
and relax. Remember, keep your eyes shut. Then when you think you
know what it is, describe the item.”
Alice took two slow breaths letting
the seconds pass by and allowing her mind to settle. Extending her arm
slowly she lowered it to find the outline of a hard box. From the door
way Rowana watched with a cocked head, intrigued by Alice’s need for
time. The others who came followed all the instructions wi
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CT : Chapter 1- Part 2 [updated]
Chapter 1 - part 2
Alice walked into The Hall.  The grandeur of it all made her forget Her
fears. Even though there was a Hall in each city and cluster of towns
each was decorated differently making them seem to have no
connection physically. This one had large arches and a beautiful mosaic
floor showing the union of four people. Spotting display cases, she
wandered over and gazed at the interesting ones, trying to stall. Each
case had a different item with what seemed no relation or pattern.
Right at the end of the hall near the double doors to the meeting hall.
Alice found her gaze drawn to a case on a mahogany table that was
home to a strangely empty case. As Alice looked for a plaque or
explanation, she saw it out of the corner of her eye just as she was
about to open the doors. It was a small colorless sphere, when she
turned and looked at it head on, the sphere exploded in a shower of
colors.  The colors bathed the room in dashes of red, golden rays, strips
of green, fl
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CT : Chapter 1- Part 1 [updated]
Chapter 1: Are you magical?
Her body lifted up gently from the cloud of dream into the world of the
living and reality. The dawn light streaked from the tinted windows
onto the lush green bed. The light made her green eyes sparkle and her
brown hair glow. Getting out of bed, she took a cold shower and
dressed. Gazing at the majestic blue dress and silver necklace resting on
her pale shoulders, she added make-up and wore blue heals. Hesitating
at the bedroom door her nerves stopped her from taking another step.
Going down for breakfast, meant going to the Hall of Elders and going
there meant she’d be in-front of all the people she’d heard stories
about, the unpleasant ones. Now at the age of 13, her magical potential
is at its most obvious. Her foster parents are unsure if she has Magic or
not, even though most people do; and so just like everyone else, Alice
was going to the Elders to be tested. And Alice was terrified.
Scolding herself for being foolish and believing tales
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Prologue - CT [updated]
A man exited the hospital room as the newborn gave out Its first wail.
He turned down the corridor towards the darker abandoned sections.
Stepping into the shadows he allowed them to engulf him. The
doctors continued to work furiously and only a nurse noticed the
man's sudden disappearance but focused on the pulse meter
connected to the mother that was about to flat line.
Opening his eyes he blinked at the harsh light reflected from the
beast’s eyes. Recovering, he kneeled “has it been done? Is the foul
creature dead?” the creature rasped in anticipation. “Y-yes, the lady
has been killed, as you wanted.” slowly the man began to rise hoping
for no further inquiries, yet he knew who he was serving and knew his
failure would surely lead to his death. “Hold nothing back from me,
you fool. What is it you are so anxious about? Eh? Well, spit it out; else
I’ll be rid of you!”
“The lady… she…. She didn’t die from
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This is my first critique. I have been reading your comic for a while now and I love your plot!Also your so committed to your comic I w...





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Lilafly Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for the points and the birthday wish, I really appreciate it! :huggle:
sorry for commenting so late ;n;
asdfghjkl0440 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2016
Awww! it's fine! Huggle!
you deserved something!
AkaiSaska Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you for the watch ^^ 
asdfghjkl0440 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
no problem!! funny story about that.... i was looking at your gallery and i loved your comic but somehow i thought id watched but i hadnt so i would have done so a few days ago but i derped out :P
sorry if it doesnt make sense XD
AkaiSaska Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha ha XD is ok
asdfghjkl0440 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
K thx XD
Carolina22 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey! Thank you for the watch!
asdfghjkl0440 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
not a problem!! i was just flipping through random art and comics on DA and i loved your comic DUST! i didn't want to miss out!
Carolina22 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much! It really means a lot, I'm so glad you like it. :D
asdfghjkl0440 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
Not a problem! When ever I find good stuff I can't put it down! And as I said I don't want to miss out, it really looks like there is a huge build up to something extremely sinister I think that might be why I like it... XD sorry I tend to rant sometimes.... :P
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